I think the story is confusing for most of you and i want to clear any doubts you have...

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Let's talk about Vritrasura our villian...

So Vritrasura got 6 boons each from Tridev and Tridevi and his last boon for later

and after vritrasura got his boons he can be killed by only one specific child who is Mahadev's ansh and that too was nearly impossible because of the boons he asked — he made sure that even this one child cannot kill him easily

So when vritrasura heard of the prophecy saying two children will be born who would together kill him...

vritrasura immediately asked for his final boon where he set two conditions for the birth of child with Mahadev's essence..

One of the condition is for the child who Mahadev should give his essence to — which is fulfilled by Karna only so that's why Mahadev choose karna

And because vritrasura set conditions:

1) it led to his impriosnment and also

2) changed karna's destiny by making him as the only child mentioned in the prophecy instead of two different Children

So initially Karna was supposed to be only a Suryaputra but because Vritrasura set conditions (which i did not reveal yet) for the child destined to be born with Mahadev's divine essence... Karna is born with dual essence that is — a child born of Suryadev's radiance and Mahadev's essence.

Even if the prophecy says two children it turned out to be only one child which is karna...

Prophecy is said cryptically so anyone would think of two children not one

I hope u got clarity about prophecy and that karna is the only one who can kill Vritrasura.

I tried to write chapters in detail but i think I failed in doing that 😔

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And lastly give some FEEDBACK

I want to ask few questions

1) what do you think of the story so far?

2) Do you like how the story is written, elaborate scenes — like how i wrote till now?

3) I show everything in detail, and also the thoughts of everyone which makes the chapters longer and i combine two chapters as one that also makes the chapters long... Do u prefer this way?

Some of you may think some scenes are unnecessary like maybe — Gandhari and Rishi durvasa's talk — Kunti's talk with Pandu and Bhishma — Pandu and Karna — Karna and Ashwathama — And Jarasandha and Shukra here i just want to show that no matter who tries no one can do anything to Karna because Mahadev is protecting him — Daksha, he will play an important role when it comes to Asur's so I had to introduce him

All these scenes are required for the story — I just want to show what each character is like

4) Which characters you like the most so far?

5) I really want Pandu to die but most of you don't want that so I changed my mind....

PANDU WILL BE BACK — HE WILL NOT DIE...

ANY SUGGESTIONS HOW TO BRING PANDU BACK ALIVE

Lastly if you are expecting the story to finish in max 10 chapters with kala pradarshan — draupadi swayamwar — dyut sabha — war... then I am sorry but it's not going to happen like that.

Karna along with Ashwathama later Sri Krishna will join and together they will change everything...

So i hope you got clarity about the story so far...

And feel free to ask about anything that is revealed so far in the story... I will try to answer all the questions

I request evryone to please give feedback so that I can improve my writing and also make the story more interesting 🙏

And since there is no DM available, you can just share here in author note — any suggestions or changes you want in the story...

I started this story randomly and i never expected such good response....

Thank you so much for your support, it means a lot to me☺️❤️